Previous Draft (#3)
NEW DRAFT (#4)
As you can see, things are just about wrapping up now as I am in the final stages of completion; everything's alot better now when compared to the earlier versions. I considered the feedback I got from the teacher and friends and did my best to enhance it. There's something that just wasn't cutting it in the version above; Outlining the Masthead and the other conventions gave them a more bolder and authorative look. I also added a few coverlines and tried moving the text and other elements around more such as the barcode and pricing. Everything is eye catching and the conventions sit very well together which gives a more profound sense of balance.
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