Tuesday 19 February 2013

My Remarks from Teachers/Peer Feedback

http://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/jeff-agenor/5011019/?ref=link

After looking at feedback I received from my teacher and peers on my contents page it is clear that this is the main problem area that I need to work on:
-The images, as some of them do not quite fit the genre which I am representing, making the magazine lack continuity.
Now I am ready to produce the final draft for my contents page and what I will be doing is using imagery which suit the genre (hip-hop). To make it more releastic, Instead of having a person holding a guitar and dressed like they're indy/rock stars I would dress my models in the same style of clothing which rappers normally wear.

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