Peer Feedback

Positives:

• The simplistic design makes it look very professional, it could pass for a real contents page of a music magazine
• The pictures are very striking and suit the page very well
• The text fonts suit the overall design of the contents page, making it look more professional

Improvements:

• There are too many colours used (black, white, yellow, green, red). And a lot of these colours clash with each other, especially the green and red.